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Hey look, Cheetah and Orca's first encounter... went kinda well, eh?
So yeah, Serval is an ass. A big, arrogant, ignorant ass.
He decides to follow the Heroes.
Also, we are introduced to the black character we saw in the previous page: her name is Puma, and she is Serval and Cheetah's younger sister. Sadly she is ill
Also, is that an emotional Cheetah I see in that one panel? Hm? O.O
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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1651x2388px 3.78 MB
Make
Canon
Model
CanoScan 5600F
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As a critique, I must say this is beyond the art I thought I would be seeing through comics and short stories. How you drew out the expressions and the shading was awesome along with the background as well. What I find rather strange to see was third panel. I don't know if the is because of perspective or the size of the characters themselves, but in the third box, Serval's front seems a little to large while his lower half of his body seems too small. The hindleg in the background seems out of anatomy of Serval's body and his tail seems rather short. Along with that, CY's expression seems too shocked, as of horrified from the fact that Serval was coming. The last panel also confuses me, despise the beautiful shading and hilarious expression from Cheetah, Serval's hindleg seems a little off, the height of the heel being rather short, but that could just be the confusing cat's anatomy I am speaking the flaw about. Other than that, I see no other mistakes that you could have possibly done. Tell me if this seems mean, if it is, sorry!!