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LOLPAGE.
So, the majority of you who said the voice came from Orca, and the majority of you was right^^
It is indeed Orca and her brother, Wasgo, a newly introduced character
I know many of you have probably read their backstory on the Wiki, but I changed it a little bit, so it's not exactly as I had told it the first time :3
Anyway, here's the page! What exactly happened between C.Y. and Orca? O.O
We'll see!
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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1651x2388px 3.68 MB
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Canon
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CanoScan 5600F
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactARTWORK: Great as always, the characters stand out of the backgrounds, strong expressions, good choice of line thickness.
Panel 1: You did a great job introducing a new character from paws to head, all in one panel! You also drew them recognizable enough to say who is who, yet you can still see they are siblings! I think Wasgo's tail is awesome, I really like how you add things like that into your drawings. Also, a very good background 0u0
Panel 2: The poses are just stunning *0* and their expressions really convey their emotions. Your action scenes are just breath-taking.
Panel 3: I like how you drew her bit into the hourglass, the close-up really adds on the excitment!
Panel 4: Her expression is just great! The way she looks, the lines surronding It adds a lot to the excitment of the reader.
COLORING/TONING:
I really like how you shadow your characters, And how you show they are in the woods by adding that light on them <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I would also like to mention that you are one of the rare people who I know that color their comics in full colour, It's amazing how you can do It!COMPOSITION:
I like how you make the flashback panels thicker. Every panel to panel shows what is going on and never lets you confused, you give every scene the space It deserves.
It was great that in panel 1 you showed from head to toe to introduce a new character. It's also very good that you did the panels' shape so interesting, It adds to the excitment!
DIALOUGE: (don't know how to spell It 0///0)
It's good that you made It in first person, and that the person 'speaking' is C.Y. The words fit perfectly with the story and also with your drawings, your use of words help a lot.
And that's my feedback on your page, I really appreaciate If you read It all the way trough, sorry for my bad English <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/> I would also like to use this chance to say that I really like your artwork and stories, and the feeling I get from reading and looking at them!