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Pagepagepage :3

Hoho, you WERE thinking that the flashback would be over, eh?

Well, it's only just beginning! The flashback will be quite long, almost 30 pages!
And this is the first. From now on, thicker panel lines will represent the flashback :D

So many surprises in this page! We finally get to see what Flama used to look like. Pretty, wasn't she?^^ She's like a red and female version of Hielo, in fact, she wasn't just his sister, she was his twin. So they used to look very similar :)
As for their design, I based myself off colourpoint/siamese cats, and a variant of the colourpoint is the rare red colourpoint, on which Flama is based :)

After telling about Flama, C.Y. proceeds to explain Kobu about her own past. And we are brought many, many, MANY pages back, right when we left in page 54, as C.Y. and Led are about to leave Urashima's shore.

Who are those two wolves in last panel? I'm pretty sure many of you remember them! ;)
Do the names Shirotora and Near ring a bell? :)

Enjoy!

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you! :)

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I seen every page of your comic and I was really shocked and suprised of how amazing it was.It was fun to read and discover!!, you put lots of effort and I really am suprised of a..(Is it 20 or 21?) years old doing alot of pages and selling them!!.Your just really amazing and yes, Flama is gorgeous *3*.I just love the colors, the shades and how you draw them.Just classic!!, or even more.This is technique.I just bless myself for the page to come, and Africa, I enjoyed it iswell.I can't stop reading over this incredible comic, I adore it and YOU!!!.Forget the vision star rating and those, you are 1000% amazing!!! ^^...!!!
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Critique by LilEnderArt Apr 19, 2014, 11:12:10 AM
Again extremely high quality art! It makes the comic much better that it is drawn traditionally then edited. The editing is perfect, fitting it perfectly! The text is easy to read and the shine of the sunset on the wolves is suburb! The designs of the wolves are very original and the cute expression on Kobura's face is just so adorable and you can tell he has a innocent and childish personality! The names of the wolves are also extremely original as well. I love the way you do the background, not quite outlined but it is enough to see every detail of the sand!
Overall, this is an amazing comic and I hope that it carries on with this quality!
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Mewisadorable Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2017  Hobbyist
n o flama
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Zundel Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know it will sound weird... but Flama looks a bit like my cat.
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IMANIKAWAI Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well no wonder she died. She had no powers!!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:P
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holkok Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016
Comvinient exposition is convinient!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol that needed to happen :P
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holkok Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016
I know.
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SparkingAround Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
oh no she broke the forth wall, she said episode! she knows!!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol
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They-Call-Me-Sid Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Student Writer
OMG!!!!! IM TOTALLY FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW!!!! MY TWO CHARACTERS IN MY BOOK ARE TWINS!!!! FLARA AND FLARE!!!! *faints*
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh cool^^
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They-Call-Me-Sid Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Student Writer
It's a little scary as well though o.o"
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True :P
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I fave your comic pages before even reading them :3 Just thought ya should know :la:

Shiro!!! :-D Near!!! :-D

GASP. Flame has "reversed" fur like my fursona! :-D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohoho that's so kind of you <3 Thank you XDDDD

Oh sweet 8D
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! X3

Yea! I was like "Totally ganna b famous now :iconimfabulousplz:"
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Accurate
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Nutrea Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014   Traditional Artist
Wait why doesn't he trust those who switch sides in particular? I assumed someone would have pretended to be on their side then killed his sister but since she just died in battle, why does that hinder his trust against those who switch sides in particular? I would have thought he'd distrust all stranger equally.
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very close ;) We shall soon see why he hates this kind of people in particular :)
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Nutrea Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014   Traditional Artist
Ah ha! I can't wait to find out then! :D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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Grassy-Aggron Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm.  My theory was busted.  Both of them.  I wonder if it is possible for powers to be in more than one creature at a time (excluding demons).  Like, more healing types like Motyl and such.
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well yes, Motyl could as well not be the only wolf with healing powers, same for all the rest :)

What were your theories? :D I would love to read them, if you feel like sharing them! <3
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Grassy-Aggron Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My theory was merely that this strength of power only existed in one "good" creature and one "evil" creature at a time.  The demons and the team, you know XD
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lili85245 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Je sais même plus si j'ai commenté cette page. Mais c'est pas grave.
ALORS, parlons un peu de Flama 8D
Pour tout dire franchement, on va commencer par les trucs pas cool, parce que les trucs bien réconfortent BREF :
Je trouve son nom pas très inspiré. C'est pas méchant hein, mais tu m'as vraiment habitué à mieux, donc je m'attendais à un nom moins explicite.
Mais sinon, Flama en elle même est juste... YIAAAAA Je peux pas la décrire ! J'ai hurlé derrière mon écran tellement elle est MIGNONNE ! On sent bien sa grâce naturelle, la douceur dans son regard, les couleurs, tout, je l'adore ! Vraiment !
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho merci de ton commentaire^^
Je vois ce que tu veux dire à propos de Flama XD Effectivement son nom est assez devinable XD
Hoho merci vraiment! Je suis heureuse que son design te plaise <3
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Thunderbird330 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, I missed a Saturday!

Is it just me, or does the art style kind of change after the first panel? I'm not sure I like it, to be honest...Parts of panel two and three, and definitely the last panel, look a bit more...cartoony? Like my style... Seems like I'm getting more and more critical as this comic goes on, sorry! ^^;

Also, reading the description...do you mean you modeled Flama after the flamepoint Siamese? I think that's what it's called...in the USA, at least.
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
Um, I actually don't know XD
I didn't really change my style that much between the panels XD It may be that I wasn't thinking and made the characters more cartoony XD That was unintentional though :'D

Ah, yes, the ginger version of the siamese XD I didn't know it was named Flamepoint, my bad^^
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Thunderbird330 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, I need to stop being so judgmental. Keep up the great work. ^^;

No worries, my mom and I are huge cat fans so she's taught me a bit about that. Happy to help, though. :D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey don't worry, you were just expressing your opinion^^
Oho I see now! :D
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PatiLee Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014

The line ‘especially the one who switch sides’ seems really unnatural to me. Kinda like on the previous page... but now that it’s repeated it really stands out. And for me it doesn’t really explain the reason behind his anger. Or rather... I don’t like the fact that you shove that info right into our face. I assume he doesn’t trust ‘those who switch sides’ because in the past he’s bean betrayed and all that, so I think the readers would be smart enough to deduce that from the story without it being exposed twice. Additionally this ‘doesn’t trust brings another question: Why? Sure, switching sides is bad, but why does he react so aggressively to it?

So I think the dialogue would have more natural flow if you put  that info after the flashback. To maybe summarize Hielo’s story.

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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I see what you mean right there :) You're right, that line should come after it's explained exactly what happened to Hielo.
I should definitely remove it from this page and put it afterwards, when his flashback comes in :)

Thank you a lot for pointing that out! <3
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Ermisty Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
Flama est superbe! Et j'aime beaucoup le fait que le physique de son frère et le sien soient basés sur ceux de chats colourpoint. En tout cas, j'ai hâte d'en apprendre plus sur le passé des Chakra Heroes, je sens que ça va être intéressant. 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww merci beaucoup!

Hoho j'espère qu'il va etre intéressant! <3
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Ermisty Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
De rien ^^ 
Personnellement, je n'en doute pas. 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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Lara00 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just really REALLY like last panel,and Flama's design is so cool!Only,i didn't knew that wolves can have twins,or is that just something from this setting?Anyways,great page!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thank you a lot^^

Ah yes, actually all mammals can have twins :)
Twins happen when a zygote splits in two embryos after being fecundated by two different sperm cells.
I think it's especially common in animals who have many cubs in each litter, like cats, dogs, wolves and others :)
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Lara00 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well,the more you know...
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:la:
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NyraWolfDragon Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
Flama is so pretty! Love the page, can't wait to know more ^^
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww Thank you :)
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh my gosh she is so pretty!!!!! :icondragonwantplz: I am gonna draw a headshot of her now ;u; And also Arven, I really like the idea of making the flashback lines like that, they make it sort of pull together the idea that it's not in real time ^^ 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho thank you^^ And OMG AWWWW thanks a ton, truly^^

I'm happy you like this idea as well :D From now on, thick-lined panels indicate flashback^^
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Your are so very welcome ;u; Flama is just gorgeous <33 

And alright ^^ 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
<333 Thanks a lot again :D
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Your welcome again X3 lol
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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MaximumSimplicity Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
30 pages? Holy god. This is going to be a brilliant flashback, ahhh I can tell x3 I'm looking forward to learning about the history of the Chakra Heroes, and I hope we'll get to see more Flama, because she /is/ pretty cx
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