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Finally, we get to see how it continues.

So, some people suggested that perhaps Oniken wanted to join the Heroes. Well... it's not the case XD Oniken is evil as ever.
And to demonstrate that, he uses his powers against one Hero in particular. Who's that Hero? Well, C.Y. of course :D

By the way, Oniken's powers don't control the elements. He is able to affect the outcome of things by casting a curse. Basically, his powers bring bad luck. Come to think of it: nothing but bad things have happened to the Heroes ever since they came out from that damn cave :)

And this is no exception: while swimming in the rough sea, C.Y. is "casually" swept away by a giant tidal wave. Where is she now?? D8

We'll see!

Also, first time I make a sound effect with pencils XD I don't like it that much though D8

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you! :)

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Hi there! Just want to say, first of all, I really love your artwork and admire your style!

Now for the critiquing.

It's a really great page, and it must've taken forever to draw the waves, not to mention a lot of pencil lead. But there's just a few things I'd like to correct…

The waves seem very angular to me, especially the big one in panel 5. If i were you, i would try to make the water look a little more soft, a little more… fluid. A way yo could do that is by adding whit caps to the waves. When yo think about it, waves in a storm always have white caps on their edges. Right now, i don't' see any white at all. Foam would definitely make it look more realistic.

In the second panel, the distance between the wolves and land seems a lot shorter than it should be. There seems to be less water in the gap between wolf and shore. Maybe by adding a few more waves, just little ones, you could fix the proportions.

And i would agree with the other critics that C.Y. does not appear very outlined in a few of the panels. However, i believe that that's a good thing. It shows the shadow that the wave casts on C.Y. quite realistically. I have to ask, though… what's with the black smudges coming off of the big wave in panel 5? Did you just smear it with your hand when you were drawing?

Overall, i find this page one of the least distinctive of all the pages in Chakra B.O.T, probably because there's so much blue, and for other reasons previously stated. But, it is still a good drawing, so keep up the good work!