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Happy new year! Let's start off on a positive note with Africa!

...Uhm, kind of.

Pages without text are always my favourite! Through them, I get to tell a story in the rawest way possible: through actions, expressions, and angles.
I hope I conveyed that here!

Binti, you may wanna think before you leap.

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Caran d'Ache Supracolor Soft pencils on A4 paper. 
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

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(This is my second critique so please be gentle, lol)

I LOVE: the style you draw and color the pages and especially i love the scenery and the perspectives you create for the readers! You flush out the colors well for different scenarios, for example when she is in the cave, her colors are darker like they should be. This is so far been my favorite for the originality as i don't think i have ever seen such a story or an concept that follows these animals in a realistic kind of way! The impact of every page is surprising and intense and makes the readers even more curious as to what happens next, so id say well done on that apartment. Technique you use to deliver the story is great and the way you draw is also awesome. The only minor fault i see is that you probably have to do these in a hurry or in a short timetable, so you might not have enough time to check for faults and such. Still its minor so i don't mind at all as i have come to love this comic!

I HATE: when people do jumps in the story (I love to follow the characters exploring...), but so far you have done them only in a minor way and most of the time the story follows them well.
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:iconxsamuraiedgex:
XSamuraiEdgeX Featured By Owner May 23, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
out of one hole and into another. gimme a break already!
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:icondismalraven:
DismalRaven Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2018  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
The last panel is  s c a r y  XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 19, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SPOOPY!
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:iconnamirithecheepard123:
Namirithecheepard123 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 14, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Please, whoever is in there, do not rip Binti to shreds!!!!

*whispers* please, let it be cheetahs!!!
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:icontuxedotoad:
TuxedoToad Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Eyes! Eye Zoom 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eyesss!
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:iconcallmebacon:
CallmeBACON Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
*Whispers* Behind you
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:iconnightghast:
NightGhast Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The tracks outside the den have claw indentations. It's probably some kind of canine, like jackals. Though they could be cheetah cubs, because they don't have retractable claws either.  
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho well spotted :)
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:iconpup-fu:
pup-fu Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
Blink blink
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:icontigerfire90:
tigerfire90 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
eep!
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:icongostav25:
gostav25 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2018  Student General Artist
I need more !!!!!!! It's so amazing!!!!!!!!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
More is coming soon! :)
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:iconzorathetwilightdrake:
ZoraTheTwilightDrake Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Lion cubs, meerkats, they could be anything.
Well, except for kangaroos, echidnas, koalas, platypi and dingos coz they only live in Australia...
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And polar bears
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:iconzorathetwilightdrake:
ZoraTheTwilightDrake Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, them too.
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:iconunita-n:
Unita-N Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2018  Professional General Artist
Oh, did she find lion cubs?
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:icon10animallover10:
10animallover10 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 6, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
You did conbey feelings indeed :) I like the rawness of this too^^ 

Oh Binti, this den is already occupied.. I wonder by who.. 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much!
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:icon10animallover10:
10animallover10 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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:iconiamsketchh:
iamSketchH Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018
Yeah, the hidding place she chose is already occupied. :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconyifflvr:
yifflvr Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018
Was just thinking.  Leopards can out run most animals for a short term so what ever is in the hole Binti has a chance if the adult lions are far enough away.  Also Africa can outleap those lions and run away also.  Most leopards should be able to leap far enough, more so than lions.  Hopefully all the family will get away ok.  Great drawing and series.
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:iconfrostbiterezzy:
FrostBiteRezzy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018
Poor lil guy.. :0 I hope he doesn't get hurt. That would be awful Dx
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:iconblueyoukai:
BlueYoukai Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Binti is a she. c:
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:iconnazow:
nazow Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Y U LEAVE CLIFFHANGERS AHHH!!! y u no 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HANGCLIFFERS!!!
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:iconmelagris:
Melagris Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2018
Her style XD
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:icondecanii:
Decanii Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018
i really hope those are jackal pups in the hole! mainly because 
a) i love black backed jackals
b) they wont harm her and hopefully the parents are far from the area to harm binti or bring the lions to the cubs 
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:iconmitch-draws:
Mitch-Draws Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh dear...
This situation just keeps getting worse and worse for Binti...
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:iconanithepikachu:
Anithepikachu Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018  Student Artist
I dont want the female cub to die ;-;
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:iconqueenofdragons2:
Queenofdragons2 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018
This family can't catch a break, can they?
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:iconsilvershecat:
SilverSheCat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks like theres a skull in the puff of smoke in the tunel
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:iconr-fakonwolf:
R-FakonWolf Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018
Right from first time I see her... I just realize she's growing up quite a lot ^^
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:iconsuopert:
Suopert Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018  Hobbyist
Binti is safe? Right? right??? o-o
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:iconjully792:
Jully792 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018  Hobbyist
I really like the colours on this page, especially the first panel! It's really so pretty :kawaiidesu: 

And those pawprints don't look like good news for lil' Binti :worries: 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much!
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:iconjully792:
Jully792 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2018  Hobbyist
No problem!
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:iconskekla:
SkekLa Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018  Professional General Artist
Binti did hide, which is relieving...however...those dots are certainly eyes, so...oh my what's this poor cub ran into down there? o.o
Will be hanging from a thread till next page! XD...
Great start for 2018! :hug:
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:iconsunny5262:
sunny5262 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018
RUN BINTI!
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:iconstories-of-heroes:
stories-of-heroes Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018
Oh geez...What now?!
Are we going to get Jackals this time?!
T^T stay safe cubs!
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:iconplumedharfang:
plumedharfang Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018
Poor Binti :( Run baby!
Am I the only one to think that theses creatures in the dark are aardvarks? x) But I don’t think the footprints correspond…
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:iconastargoldenwing:
AstarGoldenwing Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2018
Oh, I was so worried as I followed Binti's flight that I didn't notice the paw prints on the ground until someone in the comments pointed that out. On the bright side, by the way the eyes in the last panels positioned, it appears that the hole's inhabitants may be just as scared of Binti as she is... :plotting: 
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:iconsharrows:
Sharrows Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018  Student General Artist
Poor cub, always thinking by emotion not logic. *starts offering prayers of safety for Binti* Ohm... Ohm... 
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:iconkirbywarriors:
kirbywarriors Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018  Student General Artist
I hope dose hyenas are da ones from Lion King
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:iconsuperpower-pnut:
superpower-pnut Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018
Ooo, African Wild dogs?
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:iconredfeatherisboss123:
Redfeatherisboss123 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
shit, i researched, those are hyena tracks 


Run Away RUN, CHILD, RUUUUUNRun Away  
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:iconkoldian:
Koldian Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Neither of these cubs are gonna make it
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:iconthealmightyfirehawk:
TheAlmightyFireHawk Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018
Oh no where's Mosi where's Africa who's prints are those what are those things in the hole SO MANY QUESTIONS AND SO MUCH SUSPENSE
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:iconlordfell:
Lordfell Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018
Is she gonna meet the cubbins
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:icontephra76:
Tephra76 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I see nail indentations with those prints, so it's likely not feline.


Hyena cubs?
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