This is beautiful arts I EVER seen in my WHOLE life. I love the reaction to all the characters and the colouring is wonderful.The most I blew up its their actions,effect and background.
I believe to say that you are my first traditional artist that I found in Devianart. And I also to say,"Arven, you have talent!". You improved a lot from 1st page until this pages. I saw the video you draw Steel,I just 'Wow! You draw so simple and you blew my mind!". I also got inspiration from you. Thank you.
Keep up the good work and try not to give up on this story
First off omg Motyl looks so cute in panels 1,3 and 4. Her facial expressions are absolutely adorable, I just wanna hug her
The sword seems a bit too thin how ever, it looked a lot thicker when it was being held by Shiranui's statue. Also, I swear Motyl's bottom teeth popped out from no where in the 3rd panel It reminds me of Toothless from how to train your dragon
C.Y also looks very cat like in the 5th panel because of her ears and how her face is shaped. Her neck also seems a bit too short (dunno if it's just the angle )
Anyways... yet another awesomesauce page. I really love your comic and hope my critiques help you inprove it Can't wait for the next page, keep up the good work