First off, Im probably very biased, however, I think that The ammount of thought, time and effort you put into ALL of your work is amazing.
I love this page of the comic. I think you've gotten the water running off their fur perfectly drawn. I think the way you've managed to show how led and the other wolves are soaking is brilliant and you've obviously really thought about the way their fur is when its wet!
Also, as someone had already mentioned, the facial expressions really show what the characters are thinking and I think (personally) if you can manage to do that, thats half of the camic already done!!
I love the detail and the colouring! Drawing rocks arent exactly the most exciting thing to draw and they can also be quite difficult to draw, but you've gotten the shading perfect on everything in this page and as I said the detail of the water is brilliant, as are the backgrounda!
I love the humour you've managed to write and I really enjoy reading the comic and anticipate each saturday for it to come out....
To improve..... I feel I should suggest something to improve as it wouldnt be a very good critique otherwise!!
I would probably suggest that for parts like the long middle section that you just zoom in a little bit more so the characters are just a bit more clearer, that would probably be the one minor suggestion to change a bit, I would make.....
All in all, its another FABULOUS comic peice and I just love it!!
The idea of this comic is very interesting, and the cat (C.Y) that has three eyes is just, awesome. However, I give you foru stars because this bears a good amount of similarity with Erin Hunter's Warrior cat series in a way...So I cant give you five stars on originality.. YOU GET three however because its still different. Your technique is AMAZING. They way you color with colored Pencils in amazing. very few comics that are colored that way still look like Photoshop..And you pulled it off. The impact is just, WOW.
All together I love your work (you should write a novel! And then get it published, another way to make money from your work)