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DUN DUN DUNNNN Page :'D

Finally some scene change, YAY :D
I kind of cut the swimming part and made the Heroes directly reach the island, ho LOL :D

Cheetah is not happy. But he doesn't look too bad with emo hair, does he? :)

So, first page of august, and from this page we start the countdown for Chapter 2 to end! Only 10 more pages left :'D

Also, PEBBLES. PEBBLES EVERYWHERE. Took one minute to sketch panel 4. THREE HOURS TO INK. Damn ;_;

Well anyway, I hope you like this page! :D Now all they need to do is to find the sword, ahehe :D

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Coloured pencils on A4 paper

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bon je vais te faire la critique en français vu que mon italien est rouillé (j'ai appris avec la RAI alors même si c'est sensé être ma langue maternelle, je parle comme le dernier des pecnots et j'ai aucune notion de grammaire). Dis-moi s'il faut que je te la refasse en anglais au pire. Les couleurs sont pas mal, on sent que tu maîtrises et que tu aimes le crayon à papier. La où c'est dommage c'est que ta page ne respire pas : trop de détails dans chaque case ce qui a tendance a noyer l'ensemble (comme en case 4 ou tu as détaillé tout les gravats, ce n'était pas nécessaire : tu donnes une couleur de base à ta surface et tu détailles bêtement deux trois gravats ça et là. Ce qui est aussi dommage en case quatre par exemple (mais c'est retouchable via logiciel) c'est l'absence de distanciation entre le fond et le premier plan comme en case trois. En théorie (en bd), ce qui est plus foncé et plus détaillé passe en avant plan, hors ici le fond est sensiblement de la même nuance que l'avant plan et avec assez bien de détails ce qui met à nouveau les deux plans sur le même plan de lecture (je sais pas si tu me suis?) La où tu rattrapes le coup, c'est en encrant tes personnage (le noir pure de l'encre les mets en profondeur) mais pour ma part, je trouve que ce n'est pas assez suffisant. La première et dernière case ne sont pas mal dans l'ensemble. Ce qui est dommage c'est qu'on ne distingue pas vraiment les détails des personnages dans la case deux . Je pense par ailleurs (je peux me tromper) que tu dessines sur du A4 (21x29cm) ce qui fait que tes personnages collent vite à la case. Si tu travaillais sur du A3 (30x40) tu aurais plus facile pour détailler et laisser respirer ta case. C'est je crois la seule chose que je reproche à ta planche, la lisibilité (d'autant que tu utilises parfois les mêmes couleurs pour les personnages que pour le fond : ça accentue encore le fouillis). Mais j'aime bien tes couleurs => on sent que tu prends plaisir à coloriser. Le reste c'est juste une question de connaissance et d'habitude, ça viendra :) D'autant que le découpage en lui-même n'est pas mauvais. Le sens de lecture est respecté, chaque case renvois grosso merdo a la suivante : t'as su trouver de bonnes diagonales qui font offices de lignes de force pour diriger le regard, on sent que tu t'y connais la dedans aussi (peut être suis-tu des cours?). En tout cas, y a de la qualité, c'est sûr. Voilà, j'espère ne pas avoir été trop vache :o
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NekoFeatherstar Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*gives Cheetah a blow dryer*
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL
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Azawak Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cheetah is an emo!! *epiphany* o.o
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL
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lew-leon-1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww, Cheetah *buys him a hairdryier* XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDDD
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:iconzeituni:
Zeituni Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Aww, Kuma's expression is so cute in the second last panel <3 (I wonder why I seem to always comment the last panels?)
Cheetah's emo hair is awesome :D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho true that XD
Thank you! <3
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basarakami Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The thing I really like about your comic is how it's only loosely based on Okami and its aspects, and takes a plot on its own. :) I still like how how you incorporated the Guardian Sapling, though! (if only they could Bloom it... :XD: )
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for saying that! :D At first, the comic was going to be a spinoff of Okami, which included the characters in the series. But then after thinking about it, I decided that I really wanted to tell the story of my own characters, with references to the videogame scattered here and there in the plot :D

Hoho thank you, and true dat XD
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blackcat846 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Lol, LOve cheetah's hair when its wet
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD Thank you^^
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Fi-Senpai Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
PFFFFFFFFFFF Emo Cheetah XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDDDD
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RedKkPuppy Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm, I've always wondered, how did Cheetah not shock the others when swimming through that water with them?

This is an awesome page btw :3
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, well, he wasn't actually using his powers in water, so he hurt no one XD

Aww thank you a lot^^
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RedKkPuppy Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! For some reason I was thinking that it would shock them either way XD. I got that idea from [link] I think.

And np :)
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol yeah, if he had entered water while using his powers, poor Orca would have probably been toast now XD
But in most cases, Cheetah is able not to use his powers, if he thinks they might damage his friends :) He still hates water nonetheless, lol XD
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RedKkPuppy Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, poor Orca might have turned into a fried wolf if Cheetah tried that XD.
And ah, I see now :)
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL yeah XD
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LUWOLVESCAS Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
T.T stupid emoticons.
i meant this guy; :iconexcitedlaplz:
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol it's ok :P
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LUWOLVESCAS Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cheeta derp :iconexcitedplz:
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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Chontecuamaker Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*panel 4* awww, he/she's so cuuteee! It seems like you can draw every single facial expression ;)
I can many, but I must still train myself to be as good as youuuuuuuu!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho, thank you SO much, truly^^
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Chontecuamaker Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :w00t:
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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Healehwolf Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GASP Cheetah went Emo! XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL yes XD
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FreeWingedAlfred Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD cheetah: I hate you guys, i really do. XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL XD
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FreeWingedAlfred Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:I lawl
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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FreeWingedAlfred Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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DeLoverly Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
EMO CHEEEEETTTAAAAHHHH ewe
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL XD
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DeLoverly Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just noticed that XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD no worries :'D
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DeLoverly Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Goody!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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Koza-Kun Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cheetah looks so funny when he's wet! XD lol
C.Y. and Kuma together in one panel. :iconyayzplz:
Yes, I know they won't end up together. ^^;
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hah! XD Cheetah hates water XDDD

Aww it's okay XD
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Koza-Kun Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is it because his fur looks like the one of a wild cat? xD
And cats don't like water. :P
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep, and he behaves like a cat too XD Like, he loves grooming his fur all the time, and he fluffs his tail up and hisses when he's angry or scared XDDD
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Koza-Kun Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol xD
So he's a catlike wolf. :P
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, that's correct XD
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SSSWarriorcats101 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
BAHAHAHAHHA! Have a nice swim cheeta?? PFFTTT did you work your hair out in the water?? PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH <X'D OHH MY STOMACHE!!! THE IRONY! :icondignitylaughplz:
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OHOHOHO XDDD Cheetah and water are incompatible XD He hates getting wet XD YET, he has a crush on Orca, who is a water bender XD
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ToothyBreadstick Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE Cheetah's expression x3
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