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Chakra -B.O.T. Page 5 REDONE

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Ooohkay. This took long.
I mean, SERIOUSLY long O.O

Anywho, this is the REDO version of page five :)

I personally like it much better than the old one XD But hell, I had forgotten how long it took to draw all those trees! XDDD

Anyway, first appearance of Shirotora, Urashima and Near :)

I bet you didn't know them! ;D


Enjoy^^

And please If you post a critique, can you please also compare it to the old version? Chakra -B.O.T. Page 5 by ARVEN92 Thanks! <3

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Near is (c) :iconsolarbyte:
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Canon
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CanoScan 5600F
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

So comparing this one to the older version, I really like the angle on the characters. It really gets up close, shows more details, and you get to see what kind of character they are by the expressions on their faces. The panels are much better, and the forest isn't so... distracting, compared to the older version. I think you did much better, and I like how the forest in the background gets darker the farther away it is. It shows how deep and far the forest goes.

I also really love how they joke about Led's fur color, man, I too would be freaked out by his fur XDXD.

The panels are much more organized, and you can see what's going on much more clearly.