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French Version / Version française: [link] by/par
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EGAPPAGE :'D
The Heroes aren't being so lucky lately, huh? They were about to be crashed by the collapsing cave, and now that they are about to escape, the sea became rough. DUH.
Wait. Are these all coicidences or what?
Well, Cheetah sure doesn't know. And in order to get to their Headquarters, the Heroes are forced to cross the sea, so Led takes Orca on his back.
But as they are about to leave, Oniken gets closer and closer... could he be involved in all this? D8
We'll see!
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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Cover: [link]
Back to Beginning: [link]
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French Version / Version française: [link] by/par
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EGAPPAGE :'D
The Heroes aren't being so lucky lately, huh? They were about to be crashed by the collapsing cave, and now that they are about to escape, the sea became rough. DUH.
Wait. Are these all coicidences or what?
Well, Cheetah sure doesn't know. And in order to get to their Headquarters, the Heroes are forced to cross the sea, so Led takes Orca on his back.
But as they are about to leave, Oniken gets closer and closer... could he be involved in all this? D8
We'll see!
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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1651x2324px 3.98 MB
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Canon
Model
CanoScan 5600F
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Overall Vision Originality Technique
ImpactFirst of all this is a rely nice page, also I like Led and Cheetah's expressions in the 3d pannel, but there are a few things that bug Me about it: Well in the fourth pannel Orca's pad looks as if its to big for her paw but thats just about it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>Vision: Well i think this page had a great vision and over all its a nice page! (also i find it funny that in the third pannel orca looks like she's saying >_<) (also i find a distinct lack of Cy in this page XD but that dosent matter)
Originality: VERY original i like how the stones look all gravelish and well just very original!
Technique: VERY good technique as well, the waves look amazeing in the 2nd pannel also i love the way you draw! so you know AWSOME
Impact: Nice impact all in all, but thats all i have to say, saying that now i have 166 words <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> instead of 100 XD