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So, while Kobura and Tiikeri are discussing down in the forest, the Heroes are trying to escape. Remember the came they came in from?
Well, it tumbled now :3
Hielo is sure this sealed the Demons in, but... he may be wrong.
Also, did you notice that the weather has changed? Could that mean something?
Gosh, Oniken freaks me out O.O
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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Pagepagepage.
So, while Kobura and Tiikeri are discussing down in the forest, the Heroes are trying to escape. Remember the came they came in from?
Well, it tumbled now :3
Hielo is sure this sealed the Demons in, but... he may be wrong.
Also, did you notice that the weather has changed? Could that mean something?
Gosh, Oniken freaks me out O.O
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
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1651x2324px 4.01 MB
Make
Canon
Model
CanoScan 5600F
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Originality Technique ImpactHello! Time for a critique!
First of all, I think this looks really great, but something that I've noticed are the rocks. Here, the rocks all look like they have the same shape. Naturally, rocks would have different shapes and sizes.
Another thing that I noticed is Hielo's hind legs. They look a bit too small, and that causes Hielo to look rather long.
The final thing is that from the perspective and cloudiness, the cliff behind them should be darker.
Otherwise, this page looks great!
I really like the shading you've done and I really like how eerie Oniken is!
Well, I guess thats all I have to say, and I'm looking forward on seeing more!