I absolutely loved this artwork. Your drawing style is much like how I used to draw, except that you are a better drawer than I am. I loved your use of shading and it seems to have a strong storyline so far. If I were a publisher, and I had this handed to me, it would be in the book shops the next day. If you feel the need for improvement, you are more than welcome to try, but it is hard to improve something that is already perfect. Keep on making brilliant comics like this one, and stay awesome. All else I can say is- I wish I was as good as you.