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...And right when everyone was expecting (insert Hero's name here) to save Orca......................

...Meanwhile :icontrollfaceplz:

Yes, I'm evil, deal with it XD

Aaaaand NOPE, the Heroes don't know what happened to Orca. While she was being attacked, the rest of the Demons teamed up against them, and they got distracted. YES, including Cheetah :'D

So, Ryu acts big by trying to impress the Heroes, but sadly... they're not impressed. :iconnotimpressedplz:
Will the earthquake cause damages to the cave? How will the Demons stop it?

Also! Big YAY for Arven finally figuring out the Pen tool in photoshop! XD LOl, making the bubble leaders for this page killed me ;_;
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Well... Enjoy this page! 8D

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall coposition. Thank you! :)

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Tjenamors Arvy! :la: That's right! I'm back! :D First, I must apologize for not doing any critiques lately. I've had too any homework's, and my internet is painfully slow. :(
... Enough with that! xD
However, here I go! :la:

Square 1: I really like this one! The perspective is so amazing! :D And you got so many characters in such a small box! 8D Impressive! :D You can see that the heroes are cornered. o3o GO CHAKRA HEROES! YOU CAN DO IT!!!

Square 2: Ryu tries to be intimidating I see. But it doesn't seem to work very well! ;D Great panel! I have nothing to complain about! ^^

Square 3: Oh, shut your fangs Ruy! >:C C.Y. is amazing! She just has a bad-power-day. :c
Really well done here! :D
But, C.Y.'s legs looks a bit... awkward. But I do understand why you've made them as they are. The one to the left is most off, if you understand. :) Nothing offensive though. :aww:

Square 4: OH GOOOOSH! Dat perspective! :icondatassplz:
Really, REALLY well done! ^^ I can see that you have toned the cave in the background. Very neat! :D
GO LED! ;D

Square 5: Very well done movement here! I can almost feel the earthquake! 83

Square 6: I must say, I LOOOOOOve Led's colors! :love: The over-all coloring here is perfect! :D
But! Since he just created an earthquake, he and the paw should be in more movement. It looks like he's just struggling. Not to be rude or anything, but that's what it looks like to me. :/ Also, his leg is a bit "fat". I know it's in perspective, but still. :(
Anyhow! Great panel! :D

Square 7: Uh-oh! Led, that move wasn't very good in the sake of the cave. :c It's gonna break!
In this panel, we can see the rumbling perfect! The ground really shakes a lot! O,O What will happen?!?!? 8D

Really well made page Arvy! ^^ It's getting more and more intense! :wow: Keep up your amazing work! :D
Buy for now! :wave:

Hejdå! // :iconsally-ce: :heart:
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Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Underestimation is a foolish and dangerous thing -_-
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree O.O
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:icondragondog2233:
Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IT EATS SOULLLLS MAN
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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Paperchild01 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but really: where did C.Y.'s powers go :o
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh we'll see ;)
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:iconpaperchild01:
Paperchild01 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
我愛你的漫畫:)(I love your comic)
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohoho thank you so much, aww! <3
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Paperchild01 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hope we'll see It soon :)
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww we will^^
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:iconpaperchild01:
Paperchild01 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay ^^ can't wait!!!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOLed at the last panel!!!! XDDD Yea, WHAT an idiot!!! XDD Led has the Super Strength power!!!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDDD YUSSS :'D
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:wow: JAY, HE HAS SUPER STRENGTH :onfire:
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL he does XD
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AngelWolves1 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DATS AWESOME :happybounce:
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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roundtower Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
* ¡Fantástico trabajo! Lo hemos destacado dentro de la carpeta "Featured nº 4 o Destacados nº 4" en Special-Groups. (Es la carpeta donde se exhiben los mejores trabajos del grupo).
¡Por favor, queremos ver más trabajos tuyos en el grupo!



* Fantastic work! Featured in Special-Groups in folder Featured nº 4. (Best works of the group).
Please, We want to see more works in the group of you! :iconemoteloveplz:
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yayyyy! Muchìsimas gracias por el Feature! Lo sabes que me honora muchìsimo! <3 Gracias! :hug::glomp:
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MyouBade Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the dynamics of the pose led is in near the end there is amazing. Love it, great as always
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my, thank you a ton! :D
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ARCADE-PUNK Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Too lazy to do a critique right now. ;) XD GONE FISHING XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL XD It's ok :3
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ARCADE-PUNK Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll do eet at mah Dad's hous. ;P
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho cool XD
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lili85245 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
L'idiot, c'est Ryu ou Led ? Ryu pour les laisser s'échapper, Led pour provoquer un éboulement ?
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
L'idiot c'est Ryu, car il n'a pas prévu que Led allait créer un tremblement de terre :P
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lili85245 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mi disait aussi
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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Krocken Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
I'm think I'm getting glitch here. Sometimes 106 shows as 107
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FFF sorry about that XD Temporaneous glitch :'D It's fixed now :)
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Krocken Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
I see it
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great :D
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x-Buzzerbee-x Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NO! I want to know what happend to Orca >.<
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You'll find out soon :)
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x-Buzzerbee-x Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha I can't wait
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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SSSWarriorcats101 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
SUFFER THE WRATH OF LED AND HIS AWSOM SHAKNESS >X3
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL XD
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:iconrane-mutt:
Rane-mutt Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student General Artist
lol
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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Meroko26 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
LEd: "Fear my powas of earth shaking."

Enemy: "We're not impressed."

Lol XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL XD
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Thunderbird330 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to assume Jackal's referring to Ryu in the last panel.

ALL THE POWERS :iconallthethingsplz:

I don't know why, but this whole page feels kind of off. I don't know, the wolves don't seems as realistic as in the other pages...the first panel is good, and the last one with Led, but some of the others seem kind of...well...rushed. ^^;
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep, that's correct :)

Oh, thanks for telling me that ;) I'll have to be extra careful when I make them :D
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Thunderbird330 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate to criticize your art, but...well, here's examples.

Panel One: All good. Jackal pretty much always seems that thin, plus he blends in with the ledge.

Panel Two: The Rat's head seems a bit long. I forgot his name...

Panel Three: CY seems a little bit different...her front legs give the impression of being her ONLY legs, not just part of her weight. Dunno. She kind of looks like some weird two-legged thing. ^^;

Panel Four: CY's leg seems a little close, kind of too much bigger to scale with the rest of her. And Ryu looks a little less realistic and a little more cartoony (although I'm one to talk).

Last panel: Not sure, but something feels slightly off. Maybe Jackal's front is a bit larger than it should be compared to his rear?

I just realized I should have done a critique. Oops. ^^;
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey no worries, I'm always very glad to receive critique :D

Panel 1: Yep, Jackal is actually pretty thin :'D But I agree with you, he blends with the ledge too much XP

Panel 3: Yeah, i fully agree XD If I have to be frank, er, I had no idea where to place her back legs XD She looked even more awkward if I tried to draw them XD

And I agree with last panel too, Jackal looks really strange up there XD The perspective is messed up too, i have to practice more XD
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Thunderbird330 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, that's pretty much all. No problem, I guess. ^^;
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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