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Yay! First page of January, and OMG FIRST PAGE OF 2013! 8D

Also, I'd like to say that tomorrow is :icontatsu-okami:'s birthday! <3 He's a really nice person and deserves all the birthday cheers in the world! 8D Feel free to go sing him happy birthday tomorrow ^_^

So, about the page :3

Ketek is just like Cheetah. JUST. LIKE. HIM.
Oh Ketek, you don't shout with the sword in your mouth! Someone may snatch i-- oh, nevermind :P

So, for this page I practiced making the background look deeper and less detailed/darker as they are father, like :iconsally-ce: and :iconkoza-kun: suggested ^_^ Thank you my friends!

I really hope you like this page ^_^

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall coposition. Thank you! :)

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:iconjaydenthethunderwolf:
I absolutely love how we get to finally see Orca care for Cheetah in the comic because we mostly see her get annoyed are angry with Cheetah.

As for Ketek's expression, it's good with how scared he is from Orca. It may be my eyes messing with me or I'm just tired since I just woke up, but is Orc smiling in the last panel?

Something that's been bothering me a little is how the sword has not drawn blood from any of them. I know that it'll take their soul if they're stabbed, but especially here with how Orca swipes it from Ketek, wouldn't some blood be dripping from his mouth? It is a sword and it's dangerous for you to put a sword in your mouth because it can really cut you.
What do you think?
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1 out of 1 deviants thought this was fair.

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Vision:
This comic page was really easy for my eyes to see and my brain to process. The shading looked accurate and the characters were cute. However, if you want to improve for the future, Ketek's leg looked a little wierd in the 2nd panel. The original leg seemed dark, while the leg movements looked faint. You could've either made his original leg fainter or the legs showing movement darker.
Originality:
I think that this comic page was really, really original. I have ever seen anything like it before, wether it be in other comics, TV shows, or a book. I loved the character dialogue as well. I thought it was funny when Ketek was about to ask who put water on the floor ;P. This part was perfect, and I could not have done better myself. :D
Technique:
The technique of this comic page was really cute. I especially liked Orca on the last panel. The angled view shot couldn't have been more accurate. The anatomy of each animal looks exceptional, and I love the cracks on the Sword. Ketek's little sweat drop looks really smooth as well. However, if you want to take my advise, I would show a little less of Orca's gums on the angled shot. He looks like he's snarling or has a wierd upper lip.
Impact:
This really moved me in the sense that Orca stood up for Cheetah. I thought of this as cute and read the page 1 or 2 times more. This also teaches me a lesson of technique. I can base different style of drawing off of this very comic page and use them to improve. However, I will not steal the exact style, as that would be considered plagiarizing the artist.


OVERALL SCORE:
I would give the overall score of this picture a 4.5 or a 4. It is original, cute, easy to understand, accurate, and it gives a nice impact.
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5 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.

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PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Better not mess up with Orca, buddy... :|
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PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student General Artist
:D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah XD
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lightpelt577 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  New member  Traditional Artist
Is Orca A girl? 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes :)
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lightpelt577 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  New member  Traditional Artist
Ohi!! 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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lightpelt577 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  New member  Traditional Artist
Running Cheetah Icon
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lew-leon-1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love-hate relationship between Orca and Cheetah is obvious now XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yus XD
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