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Yay! First page of January, and OMG FIRST PAGE OF 2013! 8D

Also, I'd like to say that tomorrow is :icontatsu-okami:'s birthday! <3 He's a really nice person and deserves all the birthday cheers in the world! 8D Feel free to go sing him happy birthday tomorrow ^_^

So, about the page :3

Ketek is just like Cheetah. JUST. LIKE. HIM.
Oh Ketek, you don't shout with the sword in your mouth! Someone may snatch i-- oh, nevermind :P

So, for this page I practiced making the background look deeper and less detailed/darker as they are father, like :iconsally-ce: and :iconkoza-kun: suggested ^_^ Thank you my friends!

I really hope you like this page ^_^

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall coposition. Thank you! :)

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:iconjaydenthethunderwolf:
I absolutely love how we get to finally see Orca care for Cheetah in the comic because we mostly see her get annoyed are angry with Cheetah.

As for Ketek's expression, it's good with how scared he is from Orca. It may be my eyes messing with me or I'm just tired since I just woke up, but is Orc smiling in the last panel?

Something that's been bothering me a little is how the sword has not drawn blood from any of them. I know that it'll take their soul if they're stabbed, but especially here with how Orca swipes it from Ketek, wouldn't some blood be dripping from his mouth? It is a sword and it's dangerous for you to put a sword in your mouth because it can really cut you.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
1 out of 1 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconarcade-punk:
Vision:
This comic page was really easy for my eyes to see and my brain to process. The shading looked accurate and the characters were cute. However, if you want to improve for the future, Ketek's leg looked a little wierd in the 2nd panel. The original leg seemed dark, while the leg movements looked faint. You could've either made his original leg fainter or the legs showing movement darker.
Originality:
I think that this comic page was really, really original. I have ever seen anything like it before, wether it be in other comics, TV shows, or a book. I loved the character dialogue as well. I thought it was funny when Ketek was about to ask who put water on the floor ;P. This part was perfect, and I could not have done better myself. :D
Technique:
The technique of this comic page was really cute. I especially liked Orca on the last panel. The angled view shot couldn't have been more accurate. The anatomy of each animal looks exceptional, and I love the cracks on the Sword. Ketek's little sweat drop looks really smooth as well. However, if you want to take my advise, I would show a little less of Orca's gums on the angled shot. He looks like he's snarling or has a wierd upper lip.
Impact:
This really moved me in the sense that Orca stood up for Cheetah. I thought of this as cute and read the page 1 or 2 times more. This also teaches me a lesson of technique. I can base different style of drawing off of this very comic page and use them to improve. However, I will not steal the exact style, as that would be considered plagiarizing the artist.


OVERALL SCORE:
I would give the overall score of this picture a 4.5 or a 4. It is original, cute, easy to understand, accurate, and it gives a nice impact.
:star: :star: :star: :bulletred: :bulletorange: :bulletyellow: :bulletgreen: :bulletblue: :bulletpurple: :star: :star: :star:
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
6 out of 6 deviants thought this was fair.

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:icontheangelwolf13:
TheAngelWolf13 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Student General Artist
ORCA X CHEETAH FOR LIFE
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAY :D
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:iconnekofeatherstar:
NekoFeatherstar Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Protective Orca protects Pathetic Cheetah. The ship is sailing further.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahah XD
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:iconkyluka:
KyLuka Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
Orca x Cheetah I so ship it.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDD
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:iconbluesoaures:
BlueSoaures Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
Hehe, someone's being a little overprotective... 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD true!
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:iconzalay02:
Zalay02 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Get. Owned!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL
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:iconprismashadow:
PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Better not mess up with Orca, buddy... :|
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:iconprismashadow:
PrismaShadow Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student General Artist
:D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah XD
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:iconlightpelt577:
lightpelt577 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014   Traditional Artist
Is Orca A girl? 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes :)
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:iconlightpelt577:
lightpelt577 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Traditional Artist
Ohi!! 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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:iconlightpelt577:
lightpelt577 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Traditional Artist
Running Cheetah Icon
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:iconlew-leon-1:
lew-leon-1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love-hate relationship between Orca and Cheetah is obvious now XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yus XD
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:iconearthpatriot117:
Earthpatriot117 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
can see why he's all shaken up, she could have torn his throat out at that momment. xd
is it really a good time for them to be playing Hot potato with a sword? xp
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree XD
Haha! I think it's the worst time XD
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:iconcascadeoftheeast:
CascadeOfTheEast Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
She either has a crush on Cheetah or a big-sister approach.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd say both :3
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:iconcascadeoftheeast:
CascadeOfTheEast Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, it looks that way :)
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho^^
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:iconcascadeoftheeast:
CascadeOfTheEast Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hoho indeed ^-^
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:P
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:iconsally-ce:
Sally-Ce Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, Orca is jealous. xD
Great page Arvy! ^^ I'll be commenting on your pages for a little while now instead of writing a critique, due to personal issues like school and such. Sorry 'bout that.

Anyway! Ketek doesn't seem to be very happy with what Orca did. A bit scared as well. x3
I really like this page! ^^
But, in the last panel, don't it look a bit like Orca looks over Ketek instead of at his face? o3o Just my opinion though. xD It looks awesome my friend!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL yesss XDDD

Aww it's alright Sally, I love your comments as much as your critique! <3 I'm always so happy to receive feedback from you! :hug:

Hoho, thanks for the tip as well! :D You're right, Orca's eyes seem to be looking away from Ketek, my mistake :P I'll have to be careful with that x3
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:iconxxstigerstar:
XXStigerstar Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
HAHAHA, "IM THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN PICK ON CHEETAH." hahahah so funny and cute! so is he a monkey or a wolf or both ???
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDD Thanks a ton! :D

He's both :D Ketek is half wolf, half monkey^^
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:iconxxstigerstar:
XXStigerstar Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Cool, i love how you made them the zodiac demons_Thats awesome!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm so happy you like them! :D Thank you^^
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:iconsedomix:
Sedomix Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I just realized one thing... They use their powers to fight, right? So I wonder if Led will be not-wise enough to use his powers too. I really wonder. They're in a cave, so if he tries to quake the ground there's a high chance that the ceilling will hit their heads. Ohhh.... I really want to see some more action!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho, who knows, that may actually happen in some pages ;D

And it's true that it might be dangerous, but maybe someone has the solution to stop the earthquake ;)
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:iconssswarriorcats101:
SSSWarriorcats101 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Yea nobody messis with cheeta exept orca >8U
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah D8
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:iconsedomix:
Sedomix Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Now Jackal must me totally like...
:iconscarsurroundedplz::iconsaysplz: I'm surrounded by idiots...
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THIS! XDDD It totally made my day! XD :rofl:
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:iconsedomix:
Sedomix Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
:D I really wonder what Jackal is doing during this dramatic fight over the Sword.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoho, you will see him very soon :D
He's going to come back in the pages :'D
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:iconwindsweptspirit:
WindsweptSpirit Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Am I the only one that's kinda freaked out by the fact that Ketek has hands? I love the character, but it's just really jarring to see a hand gesture when everyone else has paws.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe, I see what you mean :'D
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Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D the classic fail!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD yup :'D
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:icondragondog2233:
Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THEY ALWAYS FALL FOR IT. >8D
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOHO YUS XD
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:icondragondog2233:
Dragondog2233 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FOOLISH MANKEYS!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOLYUP XD
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