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Yeah, my exams aren't over just yet, but I just couldn't let you guys wait for any more than this.
Why?
CAUSE THIS IS AFRICA :iconsuperw00tplz:

But anyways XD So, our little overgrown leopard cub decided to attack her mother in the previous page, and this is the result.
She pinned her to the ground, but just couldn't bring herself to hurt her, so she fought without using her claws.
BIG MISTAKE.
Giza immediately took the chance to show her what she's got.

How will it end? D8 OMG I'm chewing my own fingernails D8

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c) :iconarven92:

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you! :)

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Its really great I must say. It makes you feel like your watching the fight. Only two thing I would do in my opinion. One if they were on the ground wouldn't they have a little dirt stuck on their fur ? And their tails look sorta like a lions , thin and skinny with a tuft on the end . I would make the tail just a little bit thicker. Other than that I would say it's perfect . ^^ I hope you feel no offence and if you do let me know :) . Also the texture and shading is perfect. The claws and teeth <3 it!
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I love it all the shading, color, expressions, and especially how you do the eyes. Though the tails look a bit like a lions, but that's ok. Other than that it's perfect to me. The background is colored great as well and I love the way you did the last part. An amazing climax! Can't wait to see the rest of it. Though I will say this be carful with how dark you're shading or it may turn out to be a bad drawing, but you seem fine on the shading and coloring part. The base of the story is great and I like the way that Africa doesn't want to hurt her mom but might end up having to its a great twist to the story line. Keep it up!
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:iconzuemasuo:
ZueMasuo Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Her paw... Is so soft and fluffy! Adorable :heart:
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thanks ^^
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:iconraven-nightfury-howl:
Raven-NightFury-Howl Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh no ! Don't fight ! I love you both ! Africa ... don't do it
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah D8
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:iconneko-systeme:
neko-systeme Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
La preuve que Africa est trop gentille pour faire du mal à sa mère :c 
C'est tellement triste. 
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactement! :(
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:iconsudentaival:
SudenTaival Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Lovely strong colours and beautiful linework! I really like the idea of a black panther and a panther with usual fur colour wrestling together.
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thank you very much :D
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SpyroOandOcynder Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great page! but one question, is Afrika male or female? xD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you^^
Africa is female :D
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:iconwinxzafir:
Winxzafir Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pobre Africa su madre esta siendo cruel pero es parte d ela naturaleza
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Verdad :(
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:iconmunchkinpups:
munchkinpups Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student General Artist
0oooommmmmmmgggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want the next one nnooowwwwww!!! but you dont have to rush... take your time
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for understanding :) Next page will be there this Wednesday^^
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Ninih Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
That was indeed a bad move for Africa,but Giza should not feel safe just yet!From the position Giza stands stands Africa could bite hear throat and end this!
Giza seems to be the better fighter but Africa still has the advantage of size and better stamina!
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree! Perhaps Giza is a better battler than Africa, but Africa actually has the upper hand in this case! Cats may look vulnerable with their belly exposed like that, but they have an advantage when they fight lying on their back, because they can strike with all four paws at once, and their attacks are deadly! :D
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Ninih Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Yes I know,I've seen a documentary before about a mountain lion that was attacked by a really big(and stupid) wolf.The wolf was on top of the mountain lion and it looked as if he was going to win.I was sure that was the end for the cougar but men I was wrong!The cougar 
grabbed with his front paws the wolf's head and bite his neck and ripped the wolfs insides with his hind paws.
If Giza is not careful she might just end like that wolf,thou I don't think Africa would do something so cruel to her mother.
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's right! It's the same our housecat does when we try to give him an unwanted bellyrub: he brabs our arm with his front paws, bites hard on it, and then kicks with his rear paws with all his strength :)
True though, Africa wouldn't be that cruel to her :P
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Dantedragon Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD hahaha africa's expressions when she gets kicked, they look so strange
and poor africa looks absolutely terrified in the last panel
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're right XD
But poor her D8
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Dantedragon Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, poor africa D8
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D8
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Cyntrix-GM Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: 
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D:
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xFeatheredQueenx Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is so good ;;
oh gosh im starting a comic of my own and im dubbing it....
would u maybe give me some tips?
heh
also are u doing a dub thing for africa?
and are u still going to continue chakras dub?
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww tank you^^
And sure, I'd love to help! What issues are you encountering in particular?^^ I'd be happy to give you advice about them :)

Um, by dub, do you mean the audio version? In that case, yes, I'm still continuing Chakra's one, but I don't have one for Africa just yet :(
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xFeatheredQueenx Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your comics are like the best and they are all by hand!!! they are so beautiful hhhhhh 

oh thank u so much <33
ummm well.... i practically have my story... i just need a title name.... and then i can get started... so... what im doing is... is making a comic and doing something like this when im having people do the voices>>>  www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJ_9OC…
where the words move with the person talking....

yes audio like talking and cool!!! i actually know a guy that might play led? flusky??? c: hes one of my best friend hehe
he got me to love chakra
and ohhh if u do
i would love to try out for africa!!! :D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwthank you^^
Ah that's fantastic! 8D As for the title, I suggest you to write the story down entirely before thinking about it :D Sometimes the title is the hardest part because it's often strictly related to the plot, so if you write the plot first, it'll be easier to come up with a nice title^^

Ohhh yes, Fluskyy actually DID audition for Led! I'm highly considering giving the part to him, he was excellent^^

Hoho thank you^^
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xFeatheredQueenx Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3
yea... i have everything done just need the name ;;
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, so the plot didn't help you? :/
Hmm, let's see, is your comic centered on an event in particular (eg does something happen, and this something drives the entire plot?) that could make an interesting title for instance, especially if it's not an event that happens immediately, but it's revealed later in the story, eg in a flashback :)
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xFeatheredQueenx Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i found a name ; w ;
thank u!!!
im calling it Broken Past :3
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome! Great name^^
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Arayashikinoshaka Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Poor Africa !
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah :(
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123leyang321 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice, this made me think of the fight (and also playing) scenes between Nala and Simba from the Lion King. Nala would always kick Simba off her like that too.
Also, is this a scarred for life (literally) scene coming soon? :giggle:Submit Comment
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hah, that's true! Most cats do indeed fight the same way, including lions :D

Hoho we'll see ;)
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:icon123leyang321:
123leyang321 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I remember watching some documentaries about big cats and they would always fight like that. XD

Oh, I can't wait. :)
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True! :D 
:D
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:icon123leyang321:
123leyang321 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, oops, I guess I messed up when I clicked on "submit comment"... Just ignore that weird link. ^^;
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:iconraptorkilfan:
Raptorkilfan Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student General Artist
GO GIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIZZZZZZZZZZZZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDDD
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:iconraptorkilfan:
Raptorkilfan Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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Pigeon-Butt Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Africa's face tho when she gets kicked
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDDD DEM EYES 
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:iconmartinawolf:
MartinaWolf Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Photographer
*Joi jumps on them and kicks Giza in the face* e-e how about no
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD LOL
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UnicornCat Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
huh. her mother isn´t that nice ^^ xD
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:iconarven92:
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah XDDD
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RUNNINGWOLF-MIRARI Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Professional General Artist
Ommaremma!!! :wow:
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