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FIIIIIINALLY I get to post this!
It's been done for AGES, and right when I finish it, BANG, DeviantART decides to glitch up and won't let me load ;_;
Did the same thing happen to you guys?
DA being off limits for the past three hours?
Oh well...
Anywho, here is a promotional poster for a
new comic I'm planning to make
NO
, I
ABSOLUTELY WON'T give up on Chakra.
NO
, this comic is
NOT STARTING STRAIGHT AWAY, I still need to finish the plot first XD
But as you can see, wolves won't be the main characters anymore - A female leopard called
Africa will.
The story will focus on
Africa's lifestyle as a solitary leopard, her struggles with other predators and her rivarly with the male leopard Chui.
I hope you enjoy the comic, but meanwhile, enjoy this promotional poster^^
More will come soon!
Feel free to post critique on this piece. I particularly appreciate tips on anatomy, lighting and overall composition
Thank you!
Character and comic (c)
Q:Arven! Arven! When is the comic going to start?
A: Please refer to my FAQ section, question 4-8.). Thank you!
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Sta.sh
i love the impact of the picture, the perspective is AMAZING!
i´m a fan of cats, so i´m glad that you draw them
how you did the grass, that´s EPIC because of the structure and the white grass... things ^^ in the front are cool.
the fur of the leopard/ cheetah is very good.
the anatomy is MASTER!
i would have been happier if you did the text also traditional because it would fit better to the whole picture.
i would have put more information to this "coming-soon" thing because just a leopard... that doesn´t make interest to the watcher. but maybe that´s the interesting thing..... ^^
how you did the mountains in the background is cool ^^
so, 9/10 points xD
i will read it!!!!!!
love,
~UnicornCat
Vision: The overall picture is just gorgeous! The light and shading is marvelous and I see no flaws in that. I love the effect you give with making the perspective look as if you are a bug on the ground looking at your beautiful character! The mountains are gorgeous in the background and the fading looks great! The grass looks great, how it covers her paws and over distance makes it harder to see her front paws. I love the sun and the color and the deepening of it away from the sun and how you can just slightly see the rays of the sun. But one thing is, if it is possible for you to just blend the sky the tiniest bit then it would look like the rest of the poster ^^
Originality: I would say in this category, it is not as original as they come but in the perspective, it seems new
Technique: Your technique is always spot on! I see nothing wrong in this category
Impact: Overall again, this piece is just marvelous! I always loved your art and you can only get closer to the height of your abilities, which has definitely shown!
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